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This is my first animation series so I hope you like it and tell me what I could do to improve.
PS. Sorry it's so short, I'll try to make it longer next time.
I would love to see a longer version of this, but for now it's just far too short to earn any higher of a judgement :/. Audio would've been really nice, and I suggest adding both major sound effects for things like the gun, and possibly smaller background noise like people in the difference gasping or talking, along with some music, to tie it all together. I know stick figures are popular to animate, and it may be your chosen "style", but I always like to advise using more complex character designs, because art quality is always a bonus. If you prefer using the stick figures, perhaps more complex backgrounds could do the trick? Look forward to seeing a later version, but for now its too simple
This is a very helpful review. Thanks.
Its okay I like it
Neat animation! I would recommend a longer shot of the group at the beginning, just so the viewer gets a better understanding of what's going on. Now that I've rewatched it so many times I can't come up with anything else to add. Sounds would obviously be nice, but for your first piece of work its great. Keep it up!
That's awesome you say that because I've been meaning to get a sound manager of some kind and i'll try to get the men from the beginning to play a bigger role in parts 2 and 3.
Needs a pre-loader.
Sounds are a must.
Some kind of story.
And must be longer.
Apart from that, seems ok, and drawing and animation seem basic but fine, background may need some more detail though.
Thanks, I really appreciate that.
and I can't really make a better animation style because this is my first real animation.
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