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Previously on The Walking Dead is a Walking Dead Animated Parody by Immersed Jim
This is my first attempt at an animation and i thought why not share it with the world.
Any feedback would be appreciated and i hope you guys enjoy it and please share it around.
The music featured is royalty free by Technoaxe at www.youtube.com/user/teknoaxe
I've never watched the movie i only played the game but this thing that u made is dumb so i think this is a joke so i will rate it a 3 cause i dont know i havent watched the movie
(oops i did 2.5)
Its a joke about the series hah. Thanks for the 2.5 :'( hah
I haven't watched a lot of The Walking Dead, so if there were any jokes specifically poking at aspects of it, they went over my head. That doesn't stop me from reviewing this for what it is though, and what it is is a pretty decent animation, and is surprisingly good for a first animation.
I really can't say much about the writing, since I haven't seen a lot of the show. A lot of this seemed pretty random though, but there were a few chuckle-worthy moments; the ending did get me, heh.
The art and animation were pretty decent. This had a nice looking art style, albeit rough, and the animation was really good in some parts. The best bit of animation in this was when they were beating up the zombie. Really well done there. Other parts though, like the lipsync, weren't the best. I would really work on the lipsync and your drawings could use some work as well. The pacing of this seemed pretty good though, it had nice flow, though I think the last little random bit at the end should have been a tiny bit shorter. Even though it was short, it still managed to somehow overstay its welcome... Pretty decently handled overall.
The voice acting was pretty decent. The narrator in the beginning sounded good, though some of the other voices didn't. I'm sure you'll improve though, as long as you practice and try to get better. The music was fitting as well, so overall the audio was okay. The voice acting could have been better, but it wasn't too distracting.
Overall, I kinda liked this. It wasn't the best, but it shows potential. The writing didn't quite stand out for me, but again, that's probably because of my lack of knowledge with the show, and all other aspects of this were pretty decent. There was some really good animation in this at points, and it really is surprising that this is your first animation, so good job. If you keep working at it, you'll definitely get better, so I look forward to seeing your future animations to see how you progress. Good luck.
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I've never watched the show so I can't really grade this for how humorous it was as I might be missing some parody in it. I would have liked to have had a few more scenes and have them cutting between each other quicker.
The animation is good, especially as you have stated that this was your first attempt at animation. I'd say the next move for you would be to improve your drawing. Look more towards little details in your characters, the two guys hitting what I guess was a zombie on the floor where the best animation because there was a lot of details.
It'll all get better after a bit more practice. Think about the script first and then get to the animation and take your time. It's a great start man.
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It wasn't that good
HueHue XD ! Very Good Man !
Thanks man. Anything you could say needs improving?
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