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This is actually my first fully animated short. I'm new to animation and this is a big step for me. It is a little bit shaky, but it is a good start. Please be gentle with the criticism. Hope you guys like it. :)
For your first animation this is certaintly not bad. My main complaint would be the length. Everything else is not bad at all. As for a stong point, I think your art looks good. Everything else is about average. Just make your next animation a bit longer and with experience you will get good at it.
Thanks for your input. :)
There doesn't seem to be any real ending or punchline.
It abruptly loops without any feeling of finality.
The animation quality itself is good, for a beginner. The disappointment was the lack of content.
If you were to extend this and add more content then I would give it a higher score. As it is now, I must deduct points because I would have liked to see more.
Good Movie Flash..I like it ^ ^
Thanks for your opinion. :)
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