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I spent all day makin' this jux. hope y'all enjoy.
( respect ladies for having to deal with women problems )
music by me
Eh not that good but very true video. :3
Not terrible. Animation was smooth. But fairly boring watch.
This was funny I like it nice movie flash. ^ ^
thank you so much!
While I applaud you doing your own voice acting music, I think this short warrants a mature rating based on the dialogue and the language. You also need to show the audience that you're portraying yourself as a girl in order to prevent confusion over why the main character has a male voice.
You should also keep in mind that mature humor, like any humor, is an art and a lot of "it" is in the delivery. I can see potential in your animation, but I really feel like you need to spend a lot more time in planning and execution.
Yeah I normally plan my toons out with more sensible set-up humor. I just recently started animating with flash again for the first time in two years. I'm just trying to foreshadow my up-coming animations. I have a series with a large cast that I'm trying to get going. Thank you I appreciate you're feedback, deep dude, very deep.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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