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Nov 9, 2013 | 9:00 AM EST

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Jim, Owen and Jessica battle the adult aliens in the thrilling conclusion to The Aliens (Part 1), with a SPECIAL. TWIST. ENDING.



Rated 2 / 5 stars November 9, 2013

I don't really know what to say. It seems like you put a lot of effort into this. However, for the next thing you make, I would focus more on making sure the story works out. I couldn't really follow this. Perhaps storyboarding would help as well. It was disorienting seeing characters come from nowhere and having apparent scene changes when the background remained the same. You seem like you have potential, so I hope to see new and improved stuff from you.

JamToonz responds:

Yeah, I didn't storyboard this episode, and that was a hinder for me. However, the following episodes of this show, I wil be focusing on the plot, and the next episodes have a more followable plot, in my opinion. Some of the problems with the animations were due to the fact that I rushed on some parts of this, such as the backgrounds and body animation, and voice acting, and I cut out several parts of the script so that I could get the episode done quicker. Also, in the next episode, I hired more voice actors and writers, so that'll help, hopefully. Well, thanks for saying I have potential, and my friends have said I've improved quite a bit since the first few episodes of this project! :)