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Oct 13, 2013 | 12:49 PM EDT
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OMG, frontpage O.O THANK YOU SO MUCH ^^

Halloween is coming, so I decided to do a little halloween short!

The narrator is Mr. Creepy Pasta and he, well, narrates Creepy Pastas!
Check out his channel for more Creepiness:

Original story


It's not technically Halloween yet, but hey, who care's, a good scare is always welcome I suppose (if you got scared of course xD)

I know I've been away but dont' worry I'm alive and okay!
I'll make a video adressing the issue of my temporary disappearance ;)

I really hope you guys enjoy it and I hope you get scared!
Love you all



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Slender and jeff and more... behind you!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

But then why didn't they do it as kids

Also darkness it not that dark in reality


Rated 4 / 5 stars

That was great, maybe not as shocking as it could've been, but definately creepy. If you wanted to make this a real scare, you could've made the ending more of a surprise. The eyes glowing, the hand on the shoulder, these elements all made the ending a bit predictable. Still a great Halloween flash though, have a good one!


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Rated 4 / 5 stars

pretty good.
even a little scary.
i suspect tho, that that monster would have been easily able to find him in the darkness. If it could not see well in the dark, it would not be a nocturnal predator.


Rated 4 / 5 stars