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Oct 13, 2013 | 12:49 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place October 14, 2013

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OMG, frontpage O.O THANK YOU SO MUCH ^^

Halloween is coming, so I decided to do a little halloween short!

The narrator is Mr. Creepy Pasta and he, well, narrates Creepy Pastas!
Check out his channel for more Creepiness:

Original story


It's not technically Halloween yet, but hey, who care's, a good scare is always welcome I suppose (if you got scared of course xD)

I know I've been away but dont' worry I'm alive and okay!
I'll make a video adressing the issue of my temporary disappearance ;)

I really hope you guys enjoy it and I hope you get scared!
Love you all



Rated 2 / 5 stars October 15, 2013

Premise was a bit predictable. Last image was not that scary. Ehhh, kinda bollucks.


Rated 5 / 5 stars October 15, 2013

This was terrifying! Thanks.


Rated 4 / 5 stars October 15, 2013

Woo! That wasn't bad at all jumped a bit at the ending. I think your voice needs a bit of work I mean like its not bad but you need to pace yourself when you narrate especially for creepypastas. That said you did good overall


Rated 5 / 5 stars October 14, 2013

Oh how I long ghost/haunting/Halloween stories. One does not need to be gory to be frightening. While this didn't frighten, nor scare me, it did give me that 'Oh that was awesome!' You know like the good old 'claw hanging from the car door handle' story of old told on playgrounds as a kid during recess. Those are the stories that make me smile and let out a nervous laugh. Thanks for walk down nostalgia.


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Rated 4 / 5 stars October 14, 2013

That was great, maybe not as shocking as it could've been, but definately creepy. If you wanted to make this a real scare, you could've made the ending more of a surprise. The eyes glowing, the hand on the shoulder, these elements all made the ending a bit predictable. Still a great Halloween flash though, have a good one!


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