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EDIT: thanks for the daily 1st folks. I had to change the song in the ending credits as it turns out it was plagiarized(never a cool discovery).
Duration: 3 minute episode, 1 minute 23 second credit sequence.
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Dea is still hanging around Keiichi, neither really have any clue about the other and find out bits and peices on the way.
Wont have another episode up until Next year, probably will have a little supplemental episode around December using the chibi style seen in the credits.
You still got this weird thing with jump cuts. I think it a fetish of yours, and there nothing wrong with it but. With jump cut you need to implied that somethinh happenen betwen when the scene when we cut to the scene when we jump. otherwise its implied, like in the scene when we come from work to the appartement, that after his last line, he take of his coat, si in his armchair, stake a the floor fo we don`t know hom much time and then suddennly speak. Its just weird and not realistic, if we was in schock you should show it , if its an error, just make in do the supper, somethin to do that its logic, we come from work he`s hungry, and he`s thinkin about what she know about humans...
And you should make speak a little more, the joke at the end was very cute and funny, and give us at leat a piece of character devloppement. You should read book about script writing and cinema, you could be suprise how much it can improve you.
I don`t like that its happening in japan, since you`re not, so it could only be GENERIC JAPAN, but if your story is not serious, and really short, there`s nothin wrong, but it would be very more intersting to place the story in a envirronement that you know very much, that you grow in it, and with a culture that make sense with your characters. I didn`t see anything that make him a japanese, or make Dea some sort of divinity, or ghost that exist in the japanese culture...
Overall its a good atmosphere.
Ehhh... This was very disapointing... The predesecor to this was fantastic, I loved it, it was comedic, had a touch of drama and no draggy scenes and everything in it was spot on, but this...
The voice acting went to complete shit, if you look at the old one, Keji didn't sound like he was doing a presentation and Death had a charm, yet sarcastic voice, in this, it sounds like a emo.
The plot in this had no value whatsoever and was not interesting in the least as others have stated.
Mate, I don't know what you did, but you need to fix it, the series had a load of potential, but this isn't anything special..
I think i'll watch the first one again now.
alright so i subscribed to you solely because i wanted to watch this series, but something has to happen in these episodes, man. like plot. or character development. i'm rooting for you, man!
The curse of ther beginning of a slice of life series is setting up the basics of the characters and establishing the world they live in.
Its kind of a second Intro I know, but this has everythign set up all nice and proper now.
well animated and interesting enough, but the voices sound a little bit pretended, work on the naturality of the voices, aside from that, there's no complain, looking foward for this.
The animation was top notch indeed. Just didn't really like the storyline that much.
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