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EDIT: thanks for the daily 1st folks. I had to change the song in the ending credits as it turns out it was plagiarized(never a cool discovery).
Duration: 3 minute episode, 1 minute 23 second credit sequence.
Watch in pop up mode.
Dea is still hanging around Keiichi, neither really have any clue about the other and find out bits and peices on the way.
Wont have another episode up until Next year, probably will have a little supplemental episode around December using the chibi style seen in the credits.
Looks good! Might want to work just a tad on Keiichi's um...Way of speaking? Not sure how to put it but it sounds a bit unnatural but not horribly so
Interesting story but it didn't really go to somewere. Animations and voice acting are good.
This is great i was waiting for the seris to come out for months now. one problem though . Keniichi. When your heroine is as emotionless as Dea your hero (wich is cool btw) Keniichi has to express more emotion, or conversations seem plain dull. I cant wait for the next instalment, and see it evolve!
Pretty good. A lot of people are complaining about the voice but I think its fine because I feel the characters are suppose to be dull. The voice sound effect does seem to stick out too much. Since the characters are indoors, maybe you can add a little more bass to the voices so the character can feel like there indoors.
I feel there are some jump cuts too. When the male character comes home from work, the scene instantly cut to the male character sitting down. This is just my take but maybe you can put a black screen in-between the scenes and put a sound effect of a chair sound. This may provide direction to the audience of what the characters are doing.
I am not saying your film is bad. Its actually charming. I am just critiquing because as a fellow animator, I am also constantly searching to become a better animator. I am also attempting an anime series.
Good luck to you in your series.
Dea's voice acting is irritating. That's the only issue. Honestly, she sounds so forced and fake. Sure, you have to keep her passive and emotionless but not to the point where she sounds like she's trying too hard.
Can't beat that game!!
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