Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
EDIT: thanks for the daily 1st folks. I had to change the song in the ending credits as it turns out it was plagiarized(never a cool discovery).
Duration: 3 minute episode, 1 minute 23 second credit sequence.
Watch in pop up mode.
Dea is still hanging around Keiichi, neither really have any clue about the other and find out bits and peices on the way.
Wont have another episode up until Next year, probably will have a little supplemental episode around December using the chibi style seen in the credits.
Pretty good. A lot of people are complaining about the voice but I think its fine because I feel the characters are suppose to be dull. The voice sound effect does seem to stick out too much. Since the characters are indoors, maybe you can add a little more bass to the voices so the character can feel like there indoors.
I feel there are some jump cuts too. When the male character comes home from work, the scene instantly cut to the male character sitting down. This is just my take but maybe you can put a black screen in-between the scenes and put a sound effect of a chair sound. This may provide direction to the audience of what the characters are doing.
I am not saying your film is bad. Its actually charming. I am just critiquing because as a fellow animator, I am also constantly searching to become a better animator. I am also attempting an anime series.
Good luck to you in your series.
Ever since you created and displayed this series way back when, I've been waiting and checking your page every week to see if you decided to make it into something. You have not disappointed. I've fallen in love with the characters you made and I hope you continue to display more aspects of them. More specifically Dea, because seriously.....she's epic.
This concept is something I can really get behind.
I've been on board since your first video. I'll be waiting eagerly for more!
Daaaw that snore.
5 Stars. Good jobh!
What to expect when you're expecting (an acceptance letter)
Some magic frog BEATS!
In the lunar new year, Newgrounds counts sheep!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.