The concept isnt bad, and overall it's pretty good.
The animation needs work though, as a lot of it wasn't particularly smooth.
3 and a half stars, and hope that you improve as much as I'm sure you can.
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Hey everyone! This is one of my final pieces for my Year 12 Studio Arts Folio, which on a personal reflection is a giant improvement on my other works and I'm incredibly proud of it, despite how rushed it became for the due date.
I'd like to thank PeterSatera for his incredible music, http://www.freesfx.co.uk for their sound effects with which this animation could not be without, and YOU! For taking the time to watch, you're awesome! :D
Maccamuffin responds:
Sorry that it's taken me SO long to respond!
I'll definitely try to brush up on my animation, I agree with you there. Thanks for your review! :D
-Macca
Pretty good.
Im sure if there was no due date on this, and you had a little more time to make sure it wasn't rushed, you may have came out with a slightly better movie.
Either way it's pretty damn impressive.
Maccamuffin responds:
Sorry for the HUGE response delay!
Thanks so much! Haha, I definitely don't plan on pulling another 38 hour all-nighter before a due date anytime soon, I suck at deadlines xD
-Macca
