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I made this video one day for a series called "Life Lessons." Thought I would share it with you all.
Good message, but the animation was not very good at all. It was very choppy, so I suggest moving the clay in smaller amounts each time you take a picture. But it's a good idea and great message.
Haha, that's a tiny car for such a big clayfigure! Though it all looks more comical than not, there is a moral in it. Stopmotion could've been smoother (more pictures!) but overall it was a good watch. Keep it going!
Meh. Smoother animation would be good, and maybe some dialogue, backstory, better sound effects, and the black box at the end kinda kills it. It's alright, though.
Thanks for your response. This is an older one of mine, but I agree with all that you said. Thanks for your feedback and I will aim to further improve these if I make more in my future.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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