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An animation that I have been kinda hesitant to put on here but seeing that it's means of me practicing and stuff and a way to get feedback from people.
I might try and do more of these when I can.
1) Regarding the looks:
Try having some shading in your animation to, you obviously know how to, hence the garbage can at the end. I don't like the rough lining, it makes your draws look a lot worse then they are. Using another drawing tool is an easy fix.
2) Regarding the rest:
You say this is practice so you propably know this isn't to funny or interesting. I hope seeing something good from you soon, I'm sure you have the potential.
Thanks plenty for the feedback. I appreciate it.
I'll try and practice on the lines as those are extremely hard to work on at times. As for the shading, I was kinda rushing to get this done on time, but I'll try later to get things properly shaded.
I'm still trying to figure out my way around here since I'm new, but this seems like it'd be better for your Newgrounds Dump than the portal. Maybe including it with shorts featuring soundclips from other shows would help it, instead of just 'being there.'
I guess but I've seen plenty of people post stuff like this here. But I'm only posting this to get feed back on how I can improve and such. But thanks anyway.
that was retarded
How incredibly constructive.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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