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The Duck

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rated 2.23 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
flash
animation
guy
duck

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Uploaded
Sep 19, 2013 | 11:08 PM EDT

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A duck meets a human. Strange activity ensues.

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JMac96JMac96

Rated 5 / 5 stars

congrats for passing judgement! this is obviously a test and its cool. most people would review this based on the quality of the flash but i review stuff based on its effect onto other people, this is a test and i think its a cool test. it shows what you know so i give you 5 stars. nothing less. good luck and congrats again for picking newgrounds. the single best website to upload cartoons and games on the planet!


siquator responds:

Hey JMac96

thanks a BUNCH for 5 stars. As you said, this was a test. Currently in the works is something I deem to be better quality. Visually, this is crap because my lines are so sloppy. The reason for this is that I'm still drawing with a mouse, so this is like 10% of my possible quality, and I can't control the lines with the flash brush tool all too well. Anyway, getting me a Wacom tablet soon, gonna be GREAT. I hope you come back to my work, thanks again.

-Mike


brynimationbrynimation

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Hi siquator! Welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a great website, and I wish you the best of luck in the future. Anyway, let me try to give some on ow to improve:
First of all, I understand that this is a test, and is probably one of your first animations, and if so, it is a very good start. But, the tweens could have been faster (like when he hits the wall) it would have been better if you added some recoil to the hit, and maybe a motion blur just before he hits the wall. And, the drawing could have used improvement, and the line work could have as well. If you don't already, I recommend getting a tablet. I used a bamboo fun for 4 years, and it was so much better than a mouse, 1 week ago I saved up enough money to get a 12 inch cintiq. Any tablet is better than nothing. I think that if you stick at this, you could be great! But the newgrounds reviews will seem quite harsh, so if you get criticism, don't worry, it'll just drive you to improve even further! Good luck!
Bryn


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siquator responds:

Thanks for the view!

Yes, the art and animation was far from top notch, I know, it makes me so frustrated that my work done on paper can be so good....but with a mouse....not so much. and Yes, I am investing in a tablet soon, watching tutorials everyday, animating drawing, I'm getting better.

Thanks again for the criticism,

-Mike


MonochromeMonitorMonochromeMonitor

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice surreal humor, love the frame-by-frame animation style as well. It reminds me of Sweet Cuppin Cakes. (http://www.homestarrunner.com/sbemail72.html)


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siquator responds:

Thanks!