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hi there folks . it's been a while since I uploaded my last movie . finally !!! i finished what you all been waiting to see
let's thank the very generous comissioner for funding this project and allowing us to see it in full color .
i had a lot of burn out while i was producing this . it took me almost 2 months to finish . but anyway ,..
flash cs3 - animation,layout,charcter build,leica
audacity , song surgeon - audio
if you are interested to be a comissioner , please message me
can also check out my campain http://www.patreon.com/pinoytoons
I think this could have been a lot better. The animation itself was good but there are things I feel you could have improved on.
The first thing I noticed that could have been much better was the moans being used were the same for a large amount of this animation. If it was not too much of an issue, you perhaps might have been able to get a friend or two to watch the animation and record their voices at the same time for what sounds they could have been making if they were in that situation in your animation. I suggest this since hearing the same moan several times in a row seems unfitting for an animation like this. Think you would be able to do that in the future if you were to do another animation like this?
Secondly, I noticed at times the animation seemed slightly off. Near the start of the animation when it begins to pan up to the two futas fapping that the one on the right had an extended bit of line on her left leg that made her leg look off. Then when they were having fun with the third one it seemed off with how they were doing her sometimes. As in the anatomy seemed strange at some points. I noticed at the end that her face did not seem to go to the left further like it should have when the one's penis was in her mouth. That and could have added a slight bulge to the side of her mouth to show how long her penis was.
When you were showing a quick pan of them cumming inside her, the ball sac looked odd. Instead of doing the few crudely drawn lines, you could have shaded which would have made it a cleaner final piece. Also, when the two ladies breasts were rubbing together, they could have been slightly rid to show how much they were rubbing together at the moment. The end however was humorous in a way to her seeing her covered in cum.
Lastly, I feel that a background could have given this piece so much more of a story to it. However seeing as it was a commission, I can understand leaving that out due to time constraints and wishing to get this done.
Overall, the main problem I saw here was using the same moans over and over again. That or if someone was having their voice recorded, it could have been a little longer in regards to moans for this piece. Have fun making future pieces.
I say didn't like the rape or the sounds, but the artwork was so marvelous it makes me come for more. You sir desire an award for outstandness. You'll get my drift.
really good job i cant vote enough
Sounds are horrilbe but I never watched Tranny's fuck before lol
good job with everything else though
sounds are horrible
How will Kratos survive the Night?
A story about a kid and idk...
A short muisc video based on the classic song "The Window Cleaner" sung by George Formby
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