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Sep 3, 2013 | 1:05 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place September 4, 2013
  • Weekly 5th Place September 4, 2013

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Author Comments

hi there folks . it's been a while since I uploaded my last movie . finally !!! i finished what you all been waiting to see

let's thank the very generous comissioner for funding this project and allowing us to see it in full color .

i had a lot of burn out while i was producing this . it took me almost 2 months to finish . but anyway ,..


flash cs3 - animation,layout,charcter build,leica
audacity , song surgeon - audio

if you are interested to be a comissioner , please message me
can also check out my campain



Rated 5 / 5 stars

i have always enjoyed your work good graphics with decent sound.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

this is fantastic, easily one of the best videos ive seen here, great job man


Rated 5 / 5 stars

This such a great film, thank you for it and please make more futa content!

pinoytoons responds:

i will when i have the chance .tnx


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I'm sure you've heard this before, but you are an inspiration to other artists. Thank-you for sharing your art with others!

pinoytoons responds:

no problem . glad you liked my work . tnx


Rated 4 / 5 stars

I found a few, easily overlooked, errors. First, the peni from most angles looked more like they were something attached than being part of Sango and Haneko's body. It is because of using shading alone to show the definition, you used a line. Second, the top of the breast is suppose to be almost aligned with the arm pits (unless the breast are unnatural or being lifted up in some way like with a bra or hands, and those would also shift the overall form the breast take as the size isn't different). Third, and the one that needs to be fixed, the clavicle (or collar bone) it doesn't bend with body or chest movement (unless it was broken outwards, but that is a whole other case). It does rise and fall with the chest and can have minor angle changes based on where the shoulders are. But, unlike the ribs of the chest, it doesn't expand because it is a bone (actually two but they don't separate, like the pelvis is actually 4 and the skull 20 something, thereby making it, for the sake of animation, one bone), and the ribs are cartilage. Keep in mind that the clavicle does move at the same rate as the chest, delays and all, but not the breast, but placement of the clavicle is based on the shoulders.

I can see that you have gotten better and have studied on what people have been telling you to correct, and have been making those corrections. Keep it up! One day I might not be able to see the mistakes, if there are any to find.

On another note, I have seen this posted on several other sites, but none that are charging. So I advise that, not just tell people what sites you posted you work to but add a link to your profile on one of the sites or all of them. Have it show at the end and add buttons that fade away when the mouse isn't near that will enable/disable auto loop and even pause the vid. Even though those are features that you left alone in the alt(left) click drop-down menu, just makes the stuff look and feel better to the users (and some places auto kill the menu option for you).

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pinoytoons responds:

i will try to learn more about scripting . tnx for the review