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the first animation i did it
Good for a first run. Pay more attention to sound assets next time, short loops sounded terrible. Also animation ended suddenly, I really didn't know what happened.
So short recap: animation is ok, you need to work with sounds and story more.
Good luck for the next run!
best tip i got thank you very much
and it was long story for some one just started it was my fault
thank and i will keep it in mind
i bet it's sand
im not following
but thanks for the rating
the animation is decent but the plot is lacking & it ends suddenly.
for you information i stop it here because it was long story
and that was my fault
For a first animation this was very good, both the horse moving and the bird flapping its wings were very well done, congratulations they were very hard to do. However your background needed some work, and it needs a strong ending.. But keep working on this! It's an amazing first attempt.
the background was one of the thing i didnt like but now im trying to Improve my self
thanks for the tips
good for a first animation! :)
yeah kind of
A short film about a park bench
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