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Aug 30, 2013 | 8:45 PM EDT

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the first animation i did it

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NclNcl

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 31, 2013

Good for a first run. Pay more attention to sound assets next time, short loops sounded terrible. Also animation ended suddenly, I really didn't know what happened.
So short recap: animation is ok, you need to work with sounds and story more.
Good luck for the next run!


204nabil responds:

best tip i got thank you very much
and it was long story for some one just started it was my fault
thank and i will keep it in mind


metroidfannumber1metroidfannumber1

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 31, 2013

i bet it's sand


204nabil responds:

im not following
but thanks for the rating


grimviewgrimview

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 30, 2013

the animation is decent but the plot is lacking & it ends suddenly.


204nabil responds:

for you information i stop it here because it was long story
and that was my fault
thanks anyway


FimFim

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 30, 2013

For a first animation this was very good, both the horse moving and the bird flapping its wings were very well done, congratulations they were very hard to do. However your background needed some work, and it needs a strong ending.. But keep working on this! It's an amazing first attempt.


204nabil responds:

exactly
the background was one of the thing i didnt like but now im trying to Improve my self
thanks for the tips


SebDaigleSebDaigle

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars August 30, 2013

good for a first animation! :)


204nabil responds:

yeah kind of
but thanks