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Aug 30, 2013 | 8:45 PM EDT

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the first animation i did it



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good for a first run. Pay more attention to sound assets next time, short loops sounded terrible. Also animation ended suddenly, I really didn't know what happened.
So short recap: animation is ok, you need to work with sounds and story more.
Good luck for the next run!

204nabil responds:

best tip i got thank you very much
and it was long story for some one just started it was my fault
thank and i will keep it in mind


Rated 5 / 5 stars

i bet it's sand

204nabil responds:

im not following
but thanks for the rating


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

the animation is decent but the plot is lacking & it ends suddenly.

204nabil responds:

for you information i stop it here because it was long story
and that was my fault
thanks anyway


Rated 3 / 5 stars

For a first animation this was very good, both the horse moving and the bird flapping its wings were very well done, congratulations they were very hard to do. However your background needed some work, and it needs a strong ending.. But keep working on this! It's an amazing first attempt.

204nabil responds:

the background was one of the thing i didnt like but now im trying to Improve my self
thanks for the tips


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

good for a first animation! :)

204nabil responds:

yeah kind of
but thanks