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Manuel Berja - Story and Art
Rina-chan - as Katie
Y.Chang - as Brian
ChampionAnwar - Music
Ah .... that animation is so beautiful! But the story is a bit cliche and the characters, especially Katie, are very stereotypical. I find it very unrealistic that she would be so offended by Brian photoshopping her face as a joke, especially after she took a picture of Brian while he was sleeping. Unless you intended for her to be an overly emotional hypocrite. But I still can't get over how smooth the animation is. It's so pretty :)
It was sweet, simplistic and well made.
Now that was cute. Excellent quality, and a good plot. Keep up the good work.
I like the overall thought of it. It has a nice concept, but a bit cliche and perhaps plays too much on the female characters' emotions. She seems way too sensitive in my opinion, but I guess that's just how you characterized her to be. I still can't get over the animation, it's really nice, felt like you really pooled all your energy into it. The only complaint I do have is about the presentation at the end--there was no real confrontation about him bringing the doll to her, or after dialogue to wrap things up.
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Loved the animation.Very well drawn,I can see you put much work in this.You deserve a 5!
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