You know what, it could be much worse. I mean, great effort, and you have promising skill as an animator, but this had no real structure, more like Kirby having a seizure while SpongeBob touches himself to a doorbell. I am looking forward to seeing more content from you, man!
"To give in against opposition of any kind is the sole and the dominating trait of a coward. Do you want to be a coward?" - T.C.A.