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This is my student film, I worked really hard and spent countless nights on this.
Done with pencil, paper and tears and blood.
Hope you guys enjoy it.
Very well done, plot makes sense to me, in fact it's rare to see one played out so well (in under 3 minutes). The scene with the butcher answering the door, was a nice way to work in his health problems, setting the stage for the ending, which is as solid as you can get. At first I thought the first scene of the store front, played a little long, but it was a good pace setter. Also liked the flowers in the dream sequence, was a good antithesis to the reality of the slaughter house.
Thank you very much for the great review.
It has been a while since I posted this so all I can see now are the mistakes.
Thanks for reminding me I actually spent a lot of time and effort in this animation. And everybody has to start somewhere.
I am glad you figured out the pacing and motives of everything. You have a good eye. Cheers!
It doesn't really make sense but I can tell you put a bit of work into it, so for that you get 1 and a half thumbs up.
you put a lot of work into this and i respect that, but just critisisum, we don't like to see a fat hairy old mans butt, other wise, genius
dont know what to say... but a five star and good job
brilliant! nuff said
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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