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My very first flash video from a good while back. Clever but simple. Dont mind the mouths. It's pretty funny if you get the jokes.
actually....normally i hate offensive parodies, but some jokes here were pretty good. i think that it really could have been much shorter...could have used some music in the background to spice it up....jokes should have been edited...only taking the "cream of the crop". i don't really know which crops produce cream, but you know what i'm saying.
personally, though, i think this is a little degrading to TNG, which was probably the best Star Trek...the Cpt. was a good guy, Worf was really honorable. Riker was pretty cool, and the actor who played Data should have won awards. also, i think you sort of patted yourself on the back too much in the description.
yes, i know what a parody is.
Conclusion: Editing and a distilled script would have been the strongest asset, here. Still, surprised by quality of drawing, acting, and animation overall. so 4 stars.
Thanks for the wisdom. I agree with everything you said (the bee character was totally unnecessary and my voice can only handle a certain number of characters). I'm a big fan of TNG (definitely the best), I wanted to give the show praise while throwing in a few jokes about the nuances of their class structure and decision making hierarchy and little things only fans of the show would pick up. It was my first video completely on my own and I put it together in about a week. To do it again today would produce better results for sure but I'd spend a good bit longer on the script. Once again, thanks for the input.
Crudely animated, but very watchable, excellent script and motivated voice acting.
If only everyone's first Flash was as well-thought and produced as this!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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