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Hey all! Here is another animation for anyone who cares:) As always, any feedback and critiques are welcome. "Give it to me straight! I like my coffee black, no sugar coating!" lol just kidding. Hope you all like it.
Has a definite Space Dandy feel to it (I say this in 2014, when this was released way before, which must be interesting)
At first I wasn't feeling the creature until he revealed his affinity for grenades, which was a funny/dark twist. When he cut the brake lines, I really thought he was gonna say he replaced the duck with a grenade or something.
Some of the character's dialogue clipped a bit. That's about the only issue I have. Nice work!
Thanks for using my music by the way! I appreciate it.
There's some good stuff here. Ultimately the pace felt way too slow for this kind of thing. The characters spoke very slowly and took their time with everything, when I'd expect something wacky and Japanese-inspired by this to move at a quicker-than-usual pace.
The voice acting could have been more animated, and the animation could also be smoother. Music is good, well-used. The story is the strongest point, but it was hindered somewhat by the execution and pace.
I liked. First prank made me laugh. Keep it up!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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