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Kai is a young passionte boy who admires the X-Men, but he isnt a mutant, but he will try everything to be accepted at Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters, and later become one of the X-Men, or in this case the "X-Man"...
So the title is X-man, or X-mam? Cuz in the vid the title says "X-mam"
Haha! Fail!, it's "X-Man", thank you for noticing, i will correct that...
Not enough to show. I get you're trying to get something out there, but this is too early for a large audience. You've got a bad case of the wondering eyes and the lower line blips out during certain mouth movements. I'm not trying to be a jerk here because I'm a big believer in the creative process, but I think you might want to examine some of your structural elements before you really try and push this. That being said, your art style is good, and I enjoy your voice acting. I know I don't have much to go on here so best of luck as you try to develop your series.
Thank you so much for your comment, it really helps to have feedback, like i wrote before:"i just started animating (first animation) and i rushed into trying to publish something", i really should have worked more on it before publishing, i only did 3 different frames for the mouth movement and the lip sync was done in some minutes in a "rush", you're not being a "jerk" you're being helpful.
Thank you, and i will try my best in the first episode.
I gotta say it's hard to really judge a 15 second preview, but the animation wasn't too shabby for being a parody and the small bit of voice acting was good too, which is why I only gave it two stars. I'd really like to see a finished product of this, it seems like it was going somewhere. Best of luck.
I will try my best to create something entertaining.
And thank's for the review.
I don't get, the description has nothing to do with the video. As a trailer it is bad because i have nothing to expect. would've been better if you just put the same description of the video in the video itself.
16 seconds of nothing.
It was not nothing, it made you think about what to write and to explain what was wrong with it, even bad things are "something", at least this particular bad thing might have contributed for your brain's analytic development. But i agree with you about the "nonsense" part, the clip that i put "as trailer" is just suppose to be a part of the series, like a "sneak peak", but you're totally right it's confusing, i just started animating (first animation) and i rushed into trying to publish something, even though it has 0.0001% content, i'm sorry if i made you waste some time
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