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This is actually an 'exercise' to improve a little on my animation.
I love how the mouth is, but again there are quite a lot of areas to improve. Eh, I'm still learning.
Accordions are awesome.
I must say, I'm a bit embarrassed reviewing this piece since my last review on one of your submissions was unnecessarily harsh. Not to mention, everything I critiqued on in your expressions animation can clearly be seen here. Clean, crisp and smooth animation, funnier content and it's long content too! And from what I read in the reviews, this is an experiment, like the other one. Your experiments show a lot about your craft.
I enjoyed the transition from a sweet, young woman to a deep, hungry man ordering the food. The expressions are great and the lip syncing is good too. You've definitely got a great talent for this, and I'm looking forward what you have to offer when you release a final product!
Oh no no don't be! Your criticism is relevant! I do need to work on longer and elaborate plots!
It is reviews like these that make all the work worthwhile!
I really appreciate all of this, you just made my day.
Thank you. Very much. And have a nice day!
This has nice animation. Looks loopy and comical. Keep these exercise animations up and you'll do just fine here on NewGrounds.
Thank you very much! Help me spread this if you can!
Everytime her voice deepened I could see it on her face mostly through the eyebrows. That was very awesome work there! I enjoyed the ridiculously long detailed food choices.
I look forward to... More slighty longer but full of dramatic facial expression themed flashes
With maybe... a contrived plot line that has been used countless time through the ages
resulting in... A cliched or M night shyamalanish ending.
Check out my (more) elaborate stuff somewhere in my...profile or something, Help me spread this if you can!
Ha! look forward to future animations!
Thank you for reviewing! Help me spread this if you can!
ItÂ´s ok I but the animation is the best thing!
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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