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A Penguin who really wants to fly and tries to be what he cannot be, but soon finds out that being himself aint so bad.
My first animation! Please give me constructive feedback so I can get better :)
its really cute
And then the penguin popped back up from the water and tossed the fish to the seagull very nonchalantly saying "Oh, you can't swim? How unfortunate to be you..."
The seagull began to cry as the penguin cackled madly in his own mind
This animation definitely has a heart.
Very entertaining watch :)
I think you have a good sense of story and plot structure. My only complaint was the music background was a little too overpowering for this story. I get it that it was suppose to be epic and such, but you might have wanted to use it more sparingly to put emphasis on certain parts instead of having one long music track. Sound effects also would have been nice. But all in all, you seem to do all the hard parts in animation pretty well. Thanks for this great animation.
The animation was simplistic in style and premise, though that's not really a bad thing. When it works, it works and i can see the potential from this piece right here. This might seem like a nitpick the facial expressions were okay and the music. Music can have an importance over the piece. It can bring emotion and atmosphere and at first I didn't really see it fit, but overtime and given the theme it started to grow on me. Ending was also a bit abrupt.
All in all decent first submission. ::)
A short film about a park bench
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