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My first animation... It took me 6 hours to make this.......
EDIT: Thank you everyone for your feedback! :) It's much appreciated and will help me to create better animations in the future
This is actually pretty good for your first animation. I like the music at the end to. Just work on the audio quality. Anyways 4 stars.
Animation was pretty good, but the plot, conflict, and resolution need work. Also, you lost points for the fried viking.
I liked it but I think you should edit the volume levels. It was either too quit or too loud.
The only joke that was mildly funny was the "Richard" thing. The rest was just random for the sake of being random. And that isn't funny
Not very original but... hey! it's not a bad start, good luck
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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