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Drama
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fantasy
horror
rain
monsters

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Uploaded
Jul 15, 2013 | 6:51 PM EDT

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A young boy meets a monster at the lake.

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ErichoEricho

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Wow, that was really interesting. I mean, I didn't know much of what to make of this. It wasn't as dark as it seemed. It was implied the kid was going through a bad relationship with his brother. Then he goes and just leaves. It's so strange.

I guess the monster was good after all. What's the message? Sometimes we're just better off disappearing? It just seemed too deep. Oh yeah, that makes sense.



WegraWegra

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That monster look kinda cute in a way.

Pretty emotional for that matter too



roelaroela

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

so beautiful ;___________;
but the end could be more implicit, that would be beautiful too



TheMelonLordTheMelonLord

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow. I like how you didn't show what he was looking at, at the end.
It just leaves you to fill in the gaps yourself. :3



outerfleshouterflesh

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Captivating for sure