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Jul 15, 2013 | 6:51 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place July 17, 2013

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A young boy meets a monster at the lake.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 17, 2014

That monster look kinda cute in a way.

Pretty emotional for that matter too


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 29, 2014

so beautiful ;___________;
but the end could be more implicit, that would be beautiful too


Rated 5 / 5 stars March 22, 2014

Wow. I like how you didn't show what he was looking at, at the end.
It just leaves you to fill in the gaps yourself. :3


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 10, 2014

Captivating for sure


Rated 5 / 5 stars December 6, 2013

A boy's imagination Vs. his Father's realism.
Very Sad, but captivating.
The boy jumped into the water, but thinking he was being taken away with a monster of his imagination. When his Father looks down into the water, with his surprised features, its the realization dawns on him, that his son committed suicide.

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