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Jul 9, 2013 | 6:14 PM EDT

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This is a short movie about a little girl who has a scay dream. I hope you enjoy.

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ClimbLaddersClimbLadders

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I watched this a couple of times because I thought the man getting wraped up in the rope was funny. It's a bit unpolished, but it was enjoyable. Some things to work on is the animation, and the background...unless you like it the way it is now.

Sorry it took so long =(


flashmakeit responds:

Thanks for watching and add those useful comments. I think I will change the background. It all takes time.


updown343updown343

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Okay, here are my thoughts, interesting topic, Animation does need improvement, Art is fairly done considering there really is no such thing as "terriable artwork." I liked it with some improvements im sure you could get into 3-1st place or even crew picks! This Has large pontental, I do not know if you want to take it that far but if you do I will support you on the side. Hey this may some day even make it into the all time bests with the improvements I mentioned I do know that making an flash animation is difficult but with the correct style/topic any thing can really be sucessful. I wish you luck, Sincerely, updown343


flashmakeit responds:

Thanks for the review. I really enjoyed reading it and I love the support that is why I will try my best to produce another animation like this one that is improved hoping to get 4-1 place or even crew pick. Cheers!!!!


angelofnvangelofnv

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I just didn't feel that this submission was "newgrounds worthy". It's needs a little more effort with the art and I want to feel the fear that the girl did while having the nightmare.


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flashmakeit responds:

It should improve because I am going to make this into a series.


Taptoon50Taptoon50

Rated 5 / 5 stars

scary....and funny. ha..ha!


flashmakeit responds:

Thank you!


WobbleGobbleWobbleGobble

Rated 1 / 5 stars

not that great of a video, but its not the worst. the animations were the biggest factor for my rating.


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flashmakeit responds:

Jesus Christ that is not a good comment.