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This is a short movie about a little girl who has a scay dream. I hope you enjoy.
I watched this a couple of times because I thought the man getting wraped up in the rope was funny. It's a bit unpolished, but it was enjoyable. Some things to work on is the animation, and the background...unless you like it the way it is now.
Sorry it took so long =(
Thanks for watching and add those useful comments. I think I will change the background. It all takes time.
Okay, here are my thoughts, interesting topic, Animation does need improvement, Art is fairly done considering there really is no such thing as "terriable artwork." I liked it with some improvements im sure you could get into 3-1st place or even crew picks! This Has large pontental, I do not know if you want to take it that far but if you do I will support you on the side. Hey this may some day even make it into the all time bests with the improvements I mentioned I do know that making an flash animation is difficult but with the correct style/topic any thing can really be sucessful. I wish you luck, Sincerely, updown343
Thanks for the review. I really enjoyed reading it and I love the support that is why I will try my best to produce another animation like this one that is improved hoping to get 4-1 place or even crew pick. Cheers!!!!
I just didn't feel that this submission was "newgrounds worthy". It's needs a little more effort with the art and I want to feel the fear that the girl did while having the nightmare.
It should improve because I am going to make this into a series.
scary....and funny. ha..ha!
not that great of a video, but its not the worst. the animations were the biggest factor for my rating.
Jesus Christ that is not a good comment.
A short film about a park bench
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