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Your movements are nice and smooth.
Yup. Them arm movements are smooth. Them arms. That are moving. Smoothly.
...and that's all that is moving. That's al lthat ever moves, just about. And therein lies one of the problems here.
You've got nice, smooth motion, but the sound is still horrible. THe voice has got to go. I can't understand what's being said most of the time. Plus, it just sounds like a faked voice. Your early Blobs voice was best. The audio had a lot of echo, but the voice was good. In one of your first submissions, I gave you a link to a tutorial that would help your sound. Here it is again:
VO Home Studio Space by Ricepirate:
(you'll have to remove the space when you copy & paste, or just go to any submission and change the last numbers to 590285)
Watch that tutorial so you can know how to cut down on the echo and clear your sound.
You've got down pat what is the thing that screws most stop motion attempts up: the motion. You're falling flat on story and interest, tho. The stories don't have to be long, but an interesting or funny story will carry whatever time it requires.
Move more of the characters. Mouths move when they are used to talk. Eyes move when people are using them to see. Do it.
You've got potential, and I do notice that you read and try to implement that people suggest, and yet the same things seem to be eluding you. Re-focus on what you do and how you do it.
Your movements are great, but you need more.
Your sound is mid-line; not horrible, but could be improved.
Your characters are enhanced from your blob days, and yet the blobs moved more.
The stories are ...actually quite similar in style all the way thru, so improvement would be a benefit.
I hope something here helps. :)
Hard to understand the voice.
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