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I tried to make something a bit better than my last animations, but I ended up making this...
The video might need a moment to load, but it shouldn't be a problem.
"Put on your sunday clothes" from Hello Dolly
Untitled (How could this happen to me) by Simple Plan
Kind of wish there was more. Stared at the tombstone for way too long.
Cute, haha. Poor gum though :( The song fit really well with the story animation was okay. Funny video too 5/5 Stars :)
Cute try, but not worthy of the internet space.
Something constructive for your future endeavours, though. (i.e. don't give up) - make the area on which you can actually click on the 'START' button bigger, it's a nuisance to aim at the letters. I'd also suggest you to balance the volume of your audio clips. The text in the beggining is so much quieter in contrast to the song ensuing, that's not pleasant. That's all there is to say since there isn't any more substance in this piece.
Keep working and figuring out/looking up new ways to improve.
Great animation, choice of song and detail of the gum and parts around it look good.
It has a good idea behind it and the lip sync is well timed.
Overall this is a funny animation, but you have to feel sorry for GUM "TOP GUM" GUMSWORTH
Great animation, extremely good progress and much better than your other ones.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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