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My first full length animation!
I would love to hear any comments or suggestions any of the viewers have. All animations, sounds, with the exception of one song used from AlxEllis, voices and designs were created by me.
i like the atmosphere put into this, it makes that nice link between david firths work and yours :)
I'm glad you appreciate the atmosphere put into my my piece :)
WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST WATCH!!??!?
Erm... I'm honestly not really sure what to say about this.
While I have seen animations of this style/nature pass, I can't personally say I agree that they should. This particular one does not seem to be humorous, or to have much purpose aside from experimentation and learning on your part. There is certainly nothing wrong with that, but it doesn't exactly add much to NG in the long run (at least in my opinion).
Keep working at your artwork, animation, and sound; you'll get there. But in the mean time, I honestly can't bring myself to give this anything beyond the half star. I really only give that because I understand you're learning, so to give you no stars at all simply does not seem fair on my part.
Good luck on future endeavors.
Thanks for your honest opinion! I know the animation only exhibits very basic essentials (camerawork, lip syncing, etc.), so I view this mainly as a chance to get myself out there and show my experiments to the world.
I always appreciate helpful tips :)
I can see the Doki inspiration! I quite like that, the salad fingers character being disconnected from what the other guy is saying, on the ball with it! right on track with that! wish it was longer though :(
But good work! not bad for your first full length animation! keep it up :)
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you can clearly see my inspiration and really glad that you liked it. :)
A short film about a park bench
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