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Jun 14, 2013 | 11:33 PM EDT

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A tale of a fox who's lost something very dear in it's life. As memories create wonderful illusions of love and unity, reality politely reminds this fox that sometimes we are wounded by our own understanding of love.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This looks like it could be a good story. However, it's not ready to be submitted yet.

- The art was good. The drawings were nice. The simple format is actually an acceptable way of doing things. That works.

- Animate it. This was too slow to be animation, and it dragged on. It was more like a slideshow, and technically, slideshows aren't allowed on Newgrounds.

-The music was great.

-Keep your hands out of the pictures. Also, try to keep the edges straight. When the pages are moving all over the screen, it's very distracting.

I look forward to seeing the finished version of this. :)

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