Minecraft: TNA Part 15
N00bly and Snake encounter the Witch while Milky Dad schemes against them!
4.39 / 5.00 41,734 ViewsZAHTAS: Letter
- Score:
- rated 3.08 / 5 stars
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- 306 Views
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- crabs
- letters
- zahtas
- guineapigs
Credits & Info
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Artist thebreadandbutter
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Additional Animation poorestpotato
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Writer thepilgrim202
- Uploaded
- Jun 12, 2013 | 1:56 AM EDT
- File Info
- Movie
- 2.2 mb
Author Comments
RUNTIME: 2 minutes long
Zoltan tries to make up for his previous actions AND starts an evil underground organization WOWYZOWY
Animation: thebreadandbutter
voices: thepilgrim202, poorestpotato, thebreadandbutter
lips/other: poorestpotato
Reviews
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars 2 days ago
- I didn't understand what was the idea
- Humor wasn't really my cup of tea
+ At least you tried
Rated 3 / 5 stars 2 days ago
Well this animation was very good. The only problems I had was that the mouths... they wouldn't stop moving even after they stopped talking. And the comedy was a bit hit and miss for a two minute video but the crab thing got me laughing. Good job.
Rated 5 / 5 stars 4 days ago
funny animation, and nice drawings, you guys have improved.
is this a preview of the series? cool stuff
Rated 3 / 5 stars 4 days ago
Lots of room for cleanup in this flash that could have improved it significantly. Such as, static when recorded voice was playing, not that hard to clean up. Mouths randomly move. Ending gets cutoff.
Should also point out, why are you asking your viewers if you should continue? You should continue because you want to. Not because of what other people think.
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars 4 days ago
The humor was pretty good, though the execution could have been done better, in my opinion.
One of the main issues I had with this is that while the letter is being read out loud, the reader could easily read ahead, and it could spoil/ruin some of the jokes; for example, when it says "I'm so sorry I slept with your dad," the viewer could read ahead, so I think it'd be better if that part is only visible after he said it.
The voice acting was very good, I liked it a lot.
I can see that you chose to use proper lip syncing in the beginning, though towards the end, there was this two-drawing mouth loop being used. I can definitely understand if you don't want to do proper lip syncing since it takes a lot of time, so if you choose not to do that, then my advice for you would be to make the mouth loops more complex.