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your animation just wasn't smooth...I liked the music but its just the animation that kinda turned me off

Unregistered Hypercam 3. Why would you do that?

7 seconds of absolute stillness pass. Absolutely nothing occurs in the frame. This is really uncommon, since usually even background scenes with no characters have something happening. Sometimes it's the camera panning, sometimes it's birds flying or sun moving or something interesting. I can't remember the last time I saw a dead screen for this long, especially an intro. You need to hook people in with your intro. If I think the screen has frozen...I'm not interested.

Finally, Sonic comes onto the screen. His animation is terrible. It looks like he had a smooth running animation, but that you removed a few frames of it. So he just looks like he's teleporting across the screen while appearing to run.

He starts to moonwalk run, and then a word bubble opens. That word bubble is TERRIBLE. First, it occupies nearly a third of the screen. I'd recommend having a one-line area at the top of the screen for text to be entered to when people are talking. Show it when they're talking, and make it invisible when they're not. Scroll as needed. This honestly looks like you put a notepad window into Hypercam. Yes, I'm dead serious, and it looks horrible. I've seen this from a previous author here, and I remember that author being pretty butthurt about my review. Anyway, moving on.

It takes about five seconds for Eggman's tank to drop, and it looks like a choppy animation again. I suspect that HyperCam or flash might be lagging pretty heavy.

Eggman politely waits about 15 seconds for all of Sonic's friends to appear out of thin air right next to him. Isn't that nice of him? Although one of the notepad textboxes refers to him as EGGMAM. M instead of N. So he's a woman now. That's an unusual twist, but okay. Or maybe it's a typo.

So Sonic and friends return the favor by doing this weird dance while waiting for EggmaM to shoot them. Isn't that also nice?

Let me summarize:
Sonic runs across the screen, the back to where he started. Eggman drops from the sky in a tank. Sonic's friends arrive, and are sucked into a ball from EggmaM's cannon.

This video is horrible because it feels like the author's HyperCam was lagging heavily when making this. Also, there's still some extra black space between the actual video frame and the screen.

I'll give the author credit for removing that horrible hissing in the microphone and adding some nice sound (in spite of telling me to just turn the volume down as though it was my fault). But this is still horribly slow and choppy.

It seems that you have your Frame rate, Frames Per Second (fps), set really low. Try making videos at 30 fps, the animation will look better. If you dislike how fast motion-tweens go with 30 fps, add normal frames between the two keyframes that you have motion-tweened and things will move slower but not in a way that makes the animation look choppy.

This is a SCene Creator,whats the scene creator??