Minecraft: TNA Part 15
N00bly and Snake encounter the Witch while Milky Dad schemes against them!
4.40 / 5.00 39,213 ViewsOk i have been working on this piece of shit a lot of time, my back and eyes are tired and i've sitted here 8 hours today in order to finish it.
SO ENJOY AND LEAVE A REVIEW PLEASE ;_;
Music By KEVIN MACLEOD.
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars 3 days ago
It pretty good. Still need some works but good
Rated 5 / 5 stars 3 days ago
now that was some good shiz
Rated 5 / 5 stars 4 days ago
Desert Punk + Trigun = Great things
Love it!
Man i don't know them ;_; this is original i sweare
Rated 5 / 5 stars 3 days ago
Its awesome man, you could make a sequel about what the hell was that demon guy =D
Dirtown was made supossing a sequel xD this is an intro
Rated 5 / 5 stars 4 days ago
I know that feel bro. Haha, I actually was led here by your little blip at the bottom of the FP. I think a lot of us lately have gone from seeing our work get tens to hundreds of thousands of views to just a few hundred (although in my case it's probably just a matter in a decline in quality haha).
Anyways onto the actual review. This cartoon has a great style and aesthetic, and it is very well visualized and timed to the music. You tell a very visceral story and you are able to do so entirely with visuals, which as a director is very commendable. Your art style is very good as well, it feels loose and sketchy at times, but you play that to your advantage.
If I have one piece or constructive criticism it would be that you could take some steps to make the animation look a little less 'flash-ey". I'm not sure if you do already, but some surefire ways to make that happen is to bump your framerate up to 24FPS and animate on twos. That is to say that while the timeline runs at 24FPS each separate drawing will occupy 2 frames, this is pretty much how traditional animation has run since the inception of Disney (although anime has a slightly slower framerate as a result of poor budgets, but I don't know the numbers off the top of my head.) It doesn't seem like you do too much tweening except for camera movements and whatnot, but when you do always be sure to break the tween up into keyframes when done and then remove every other one (putting that animation on twos as well). Please forgive if I am quoting you common knowledge, as by looking at your stuff I can clearly see that you are a more naturally gifted animator than I, just figured I'd pass it along anyways.
As for why I gave you five stars while I still had "criticism," it's because I like to judge the cartoons I review on their on an individual basis based on their merit, potential and entertainment factor, so while there is always room to improve (in all instances) this one accomplished everything it set out to do admirably and was a very fun piece of work.
yup, the animation is on 24 fps for giving it smoothing, also i'm really happy that you taked the time for writing me all those words.
I'm glad that you liked it and i'll take that points on count.
thanks man ^^ and sorry if my english is a little bit crappy...