Go!
Go!
Score:
rated 3.83 / 5 stars
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11,294 Views
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Action
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chase
devil
dirtown

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Uploaded
Jun 8, 2013 | 11:15 PM EDT
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9.5 mb
  • Daily 5th Place June 11, 2013

Author Comments

Ok i have been working on this piece of shit a lot of time, my back and eyes are tired and i've sitted here 8 hours today in order to finish it.

SO ENJOY AND LEAVE A REVIEW PLEASE ;_;

Music By KEVIN MACLEOD.

Reviews


JamzzJamzz

Rated 4 / 5 stars 4 days ago

Looks very intriguing. I like the concept and the setting. Music is fantastic. Overall seems like a good starting animation.
One downside is that I'm not quite sure what's going on. That being said, if you're just going for a random fight type animation then that's not a problem at all.

What's the name of the song? His website is huge. :)


SoundarK responds:

The name is "cut & run" thanks ^^


MaxwellXMaxwellX

Rated 4 / 5 stars 4 days ago

The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.



tbremisetbremise

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars 4 days ago

reminds me of desert punk slightly. cool stuff.



TCKnightTCKnight

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars 4 days ago

I liked the combination of the animation and the music. They really went together. And the art style was a little rough, but appropriate. I would have liked to have seen some stuff that helped put some context on the characters. Maybe clearly visual wanted posters or the like, just to provide some extra details.


SoundarK responds:

Indeed i thought that adding some posters and stuff can helped but...that details are characteristic of my favourite animator, i don't know if it's ok to copy that...peopla can see it like a plagio or something.
but you're right, i'll try to add some stuff...
thanks


sirjeffofshortsirjeffofshort

Rated 5 / 5 stars 4 days ago

I know that feel bro. Haha, I actually was led here by your little blip at the bottom of the FP. I think a lot of us lately have gone from seeing our work get tens to hundreds of thousands of views to just a few hundred (although in my case it's probably just a matter in a decline in quality haha).

Anyways onto the actual review. This cartoon has a great style and aesthetic, and it is very well visualized and timed to the music. You tell a very visceral story and you are able to do so entirely with visuals, which as a director is very commendable. Your art style is very good as well, it feels loose and sketchy at times, but you play that to your advantage.

If I have one piece or constructive criticism it would be that you could take some steps to make the animation look a little less 'flash-ey". I'm not sure if you do already, but some surefire ways to make that happen is to bump your framerate up to 24FPS and animate on twos. That is to say that while the timeline runs at 24FPS each separate drawing will occupy 2 frames, this is pretty much how traditional animation has run since the inception of Disney (although anime has a slightly slower framerate as a result of poor budgets, but I don't know the numbers off the top of my head.) It doesn't seem like you do too much tweening except for camera movements and whatnot, but when you do always be sure to break the tween up into keyframes when done and then remove every other one (putting that animation on twos as well). Please forgive if I am quoting you common knowledge, as by looking at your stuff I can clearly see that you are a more naturally gifted animator than I, just figured I'd pass it along anyways.

As for why I gave you five stars while I still had "criticism," it's because I like to judge the cartoons I review on their on an individual basis based on their merit, potential and entertainment factor, so while there is always room to improve (in all instances) this one accomplished everything it set out to do admirably and was a very fun piece of work.


SoundarK responds:

yup, the animation is on 24 fps for giving it smoothing, also i'm really happy that you taked the time for writing me all those words.

I'm glad that you liked it and i'll take that points on count.

thanks man ^^ and sorry if my english is a little bit crappy...