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Jun 5, 2013 | 12:25 PM EDT

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robocop333robocop333

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hey SonicSteel! This is one of the creators behind this simple flash animation. I just wanted to point out that yes, we did skip over a lot of detail. A lot of detail. The reason behind this is because we had a deadline. We are (or rather were) Juniors in high school at the time, so it was an assignment to be done. I sincerely thank you for your feedback and we may consider your advice in our next animation. :)


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cavifaxcavifax

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice soundtrack, you could get better drawings but it's ok.



dietoday6dietoday6

Rated 0 / 5 stars

what the hell! that sucks!



creppergronkhcreppergronkh

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Fantastic still some bumbs put the Voice acting is very good.And the drawing is not proffesional but it is very good.Please do more !



SonicSteelSonicSteel

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Really need to work on details. Objects are frequently a single color, as if there's no light reflection at all. Not even an attempt to add a simple gradient to things to show a half-decent light reflection effect. This distracted from scenes like the people walking into the door, because all I saw was two gray rectangles on top of a brown rectangle. No depth, no color, no anything.

No arms on the bodies or legs, to skip out on drawing a walk animation.

Also, the chain on the door is not at all convincing. Are those chains glued to the door? Two handles with a chain and a lock would have been more convincing. Maybe a 'do not enter' sign too.

When that guy fell over, I thought it was someone offscreen holding a ball in their hand. Again, no details. I didn't find this funny, but perhaps that's because I notice the details more than anything.

On the plus side, I did notice that you drew the columns and lots of other things perfectly straight instead of jagged and freehand. So you have some attention to detail.