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OBI TRICE REAL NAME NO GIMMICKS
I mean.. hello and welcome to my improv music video
worked real hard on it , hope you enjoy the animation
and possibly the music
If you enjoy this cartoon please support me and add me as a fan on newgrounds!
I found this to be pretty good. I think it was at least mediocre. I really do appreciate the different styles. Well, it seemed like that was the intention. The animation was pretty good. I did feel like this was a bit too long.
The voice got a bit annoying too. I still appreciate this for its creativity. I wouldn't give it the Daily Feature, though. Well, whatever the people want, I guess. There probably should be more cartoons about birds.
cant resist saying this but the green bird and the bald eagle looked like they were having a retarded seizure(no offence and F*CKING hilarious!)
This is intentional :) thanks
As I interpreted the video as mostly if not purely comedic in purpose, I think this was pretty freaking awesome. It didn't have to have amazing animation, in fact I believe that it was better without it. There were a couple slightly awkward pauses, but hey, I got a laugh, and it looks like most other people did, so who gives a shit. Thanks for your effort, trust that the outcome was enjoyed.
Going to be honest and say that I did not care for the song but I do not really care for this kind of music so I am not going to rate up or down about it. In my opinion you might of wanted to put something like a replay button in the end for people who wish to watch this over again.
-you worked hard on it
-unique song (I think)
-subtitles did not always match or were not in sync
-art was okay but that is about it
I don't mean to sound harsh but I just want you to try and get better so more people can enjoy your stuff in the future. Please try to get better with the animation since that really helps a lot with the videos and the rating you get. I hope to see more of your videos later and I also hope you get better at this if you truly enjoy doing it, good luck!
Thanks for the crit
Hahaha pretty nice brother!, the song was just awesome
Thanks! Glad you liked the song, You all are motivating me . heres to the next one
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