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May 28, 2013 | 1:08 PM EDT

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well, i'll but this as lightly as I can. I can see you did put effort into this, the audio was decent but the voice acting left things to be desired as with the animation. You used an over used joke that everyone knows but where you had the potential to go off and do something with it, you didn't

All and all I do see a fully colored cartoon with ok audio, but in your next Flash toon try to focus on your animation and voice acting. The sound of your voice indicates you are rather young so this is mildly impressive.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Keep practicing, dude, and once you feel like you're skilled enough, pour all your heart and soul into a project. A few years from now, you might have something worthy of the front page.

ZiaoChaotic responds:

Oh, keep dreaming! :) I've been working on a project for a few weeks now.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I can tell you used the old products that where used in newgrounds. It wasnt that bad. You might get blammed tho...
Better than what I would have made.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

This is an extremely old and tired joke, paired with bad animation and a laugh track (the lips just open/close quick, which is notable with the second person's lips moving after he's done speaking). I'm assuming the text on the 'replay' page was handwritten. If so, I would strongly suggest using a font next time. It's really hard to read. Font also looks more professional.

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