Be a Supporter!

Opening Animation

Score:
rated 2.34 / 5 stars
Views:
2,199 Views
Share Links:
Genre:
Other
Tags:
sequence
title
angel
faomu

Credits & Info

Uploaded
May 10, 2013 | 8:52 PM EDT

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

Hello, I know that it's not usually accepted for people to post their title animations as a movie in themselves, but I'd really appreciate honest feedback and critique, as well as suggestions for animations and any help that can be given. This is my first flash movie, and I'm kinda nervous!

Reviews


RazorTheRabbitRazorTheRabbit

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

You know what I call that animation?
A start, and a damn good one too!
Keep up the good work! :D



crazy8slayercrazy8slayer

Rated 2 / 5 stars

as far as the artwork just add another wing and some breasts and it will look great



TerashiLeonGokenTerashiLeonGoken

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

You could give the poor girl some breasts, even if they're small mounds/modest rack, just to ascertain her gender. Because if that IS a guy, hes androgynous as fuck. And yeah, a second wing would make sense unless you're going for that FF7 garbage.


People find this review helpful!

ALinkToTheFutureALinkToTheFuture

Rated 3 / 5 stars

The feather turning into the text is a little odd as it doesn't really look like it's turning into the text. If you didn't want it to be turning into the text to begin with then maybe have it fall of the screen and reveal the text underneath it or something along those lines.

The speed at which the feather moves is also very fast and jumpy. Perhaps slowing it down might help it out some.



CalebooseCaleboose

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Yes, nice concept but there are a couple of glitches here and there. Where exactly does the feather disappears to? If you intended it to become the words "FAOUMU Animations", you'll have to add a transformation between the two to let the viewer know. Also you might want to add a little more detail to the wings so the falling feather doesn't look as spontaneous as it does here. Otherwise it looks good.