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May 10, 2013 | 5:28 PM EDT

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Hello people who watched my last animation and actually like it enough to be on this page. I bring you Pokemon Darkness episode 2. Ever since episode 1 I spent a bit of time learning flash. For example I now know what a movie symbol does. :)
Anyway I think I have improved a bit.

Enjoy the movie and please leave constructive criticism. I like that stuff.

By the way Mudkip is a water type. I looked it up.

Reviews


Hanchaisun2Hanchaisun2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 13, 2013

i liked it but there are quite a few spelling/grammar errors.



stardustdragonstardustdragon

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 11, 2013

pretty cool



EASTBEASTEASTBEAST

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 11, 2013

A couple friends and I have tuned into your last episode and were wondering if you would make
a second. I wasn't expecting much, but honestly I have to say you have improved a considerable amount from the previous episode.

While the fact that he knows nothing about Pokemon makes the story line a bit tedious for the viewer it also offers a good chance for development throughout a series of episodes.

So now its time for the constructive criticism part. A lot of your animation is still
in a bit of a crude stage, even though it seems to be improving at a good rate. Integrating non-
sprited items with sprited ones can get messy fast. (Such as the hole in the rock on the
beach and the smiley face over Mudkip's head when he chooses to remain outside his pokeball.
Also you have some spelling mistakes that tend to drive quality down. Be sure to proof your
dialog before you release it. Words like "Ocean, awkward, and Organization" were misspelled.

I wasn't sure if Mudkip being weak against a electric types was a plot device in the story, but he is in fact a ground type and should be immune or at least mentioned otherwise.

Over all, keep up the improvements. If you have any other questions, feel free to PM me. Good luck and I hope this helps.

Esty


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teejay-number13teejay-number13

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 11, 2013

Yeah this is much better. The animation was pretty good and you didn't "cut corners" like last time. The story is getting better. I want to know more about this new criminal team and it will be interesting to follow a person who knows nothing at all about pokemon and suddenly becomes a trainer. My only suggestion is to cut back on the number of "I can't tell you now but you'll find out later" lines.


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Gorksonic234Gorksonic234

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 10, 2013

Well done on the second Episode better than the first.
The story seems good so far. Continue it if you like.
The Space to contine is much easier to do Many times than click the mouse on the Flash.