I like the art. The narration could use some work though.
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Part three Part three of the dramatic reading of a story my sister wrote when she was 13. In this episode, Parves distracts the guards and Maylab runs away from annoying children.
This is probably one of the worst readings, but I stepped up the visuals to make up for it. Err.. a little bit at least
Enjoyable story kept me interested through out the whole clip. Art was also well done. Nice Job!
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