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Sep 27, 2000 | 1:45 PM EDT

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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol that was entertaining, you gave it a comic style with a modern humor base, which was funnt, i did think the text formed kinda slow, and the buttons were ok but might flow better without the buttons...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
why not just let it flow like a movie instead of the buttons? and try and speed up the text in the bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
This was neat, but seemed to run abit slow and could use abit of updating...

~X~



FattyWhaleFattyWhale

Rated 1 / 5 stars

K...

^^Good Points^^
This isn't really a game, nor is it a movie really, it's a comic, which we don't really see here much on NG. I liked how you took these images of the ideal American couple and made such a strange plot with it. The text was funny and the ending was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use some voice overs, or atleast some kind of music to break up the monotony. The text was really hard to understand at some points just because it was all slang.