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My second animation hope u like
The soundtrack is taken from somewhere...and the intro is awful. You should probably cite the sources for your music. The animation is half decent, although it looks like it was made in a 2-bit stick animation program. Not sure what to say. Umm...try harder? Well, taking into account this is your second animation, I'd say it's ok. But I'd practice a bit more without uploading before putting the show on the road. Good day sir.
Not the best transitioning! But i really love the bow he take at the end! ahahahhahahahah made me crack up! if you add some music would make it all the better! But keep it up! Was pretty entertaining!
Props for smooth animation and well executed concept.
I would encourage you to slow it down, and polish the animation.
Wouldn't hurt if it were longer too.
Good effort, but there is much room to improve.
Too short in my opinion and you should work on increasing the frame rate. It just needs a lot more frames in general. The motions aren't smoothed out at all and the action was short lived. However, it's worth working on. I haven't seen a decent new one of these for a while so if you can consider this a rough draft and get to expanding it into something much more drawn out and polished up, I could see this coming up as a nice little vid.
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