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It's not so good looking... 1.5 stars makes me wanna hang ma self but I shall keep tryin! Thank for the GREAT critizism!
I actually really like it. The art is excellent at the beginning, and then it sort of takes this rushed feeling. I really like animations like this, and I like your style. This does seem a bit hurried, and I can see room for improvement (for instance, I can't read many of the words on the screen. To fix this, I'd recommend writing the words really large so it is clear, and then shrinking it down to fit on the screen).
Very nice. I hope to see more from you.
You're developing, actually, very well. If you worked and you practiced a lot more, you could go places man! Believe me, though, I know that I haven't really released that much either, but I'm still working on my current project. It's already taken me 3 months so far! XD Anyway, hope you improve at this and I can't wait for more, man.
Thankz means a lot -sniff- :D
Awesome bro! But its seems as if you rushed
A short film about a park bench
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