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Go!
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urbfilms
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Apr 21, 2013 | 1:00 PM EDT
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Author Comments

Hi Newgrounds! I'm Urbfilms! This is a submission for NATA, and I'm SUPER proud of it, even though it might not be as good as the other submissions right now.
As far as the story goes, it's about a man that has done bad deeds in his life, and he wants to gain recognition by being a hero. Little did he know that there was a bomb near the bank, and he died, but he managed to save the hostages.
Thanks for your time, and I hope I do well!

Reviews


Good-and-old-llermoGood-and-old-llermo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 2, 2013

Much stronger than the design suggests. I just hope you don't spoil the story in the description in a near future. But i was clearly impressed. And the Music was pretty good as well.

This might not be the best submission of this year's but could you use a tune up and stand as a product of it's own.


urbfilms responds:

Thanks so much!


legosrocklegosrock

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 28, 2013

really good what was the gold thing at the grave,if u do make a sequal he should be saving people as a ghost


urbfilms responds:

Thanks for the review! If I do make a sequel, and he saves people as ghosts, then what would the story be? Oh well, thanks for the review!


supergamer12333supergamer12333

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 25, 2013

The hero is ghost -goods
music
sound
hero
story
please part 2!!


urbfilms responds:

Thanks, but I don't know what I'd put in part two! Thanks for the review anyways!


ElricMasenkoElricMasenko

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 23, 2013

I enjoyed this, you got a real talent for this sorta thing. Unspoken stories are always good to watch. Your art style was a bit awkward, especially the zoom in on the legs where they were crossed before he took off, but improvement is the spice of animation, and i honestly couldn't make a flash to save my life, so the quality was good. The music was a good choice, though if i may offer a suggestion, maybe a few songs between different emotions instead of just the one would have made it awesome. Great work, and a fave for your account. I can't wait to see what you come out with next!


urbfilms responds:

Thanks man! It means so much!


The-Great-OneThe-Great-One

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 21, 2013

I'm a bit mixed here. Although I did enjoy the story and the animation, I have to say that the design of the buildings, items, and characters are a bit lazy at times. Also the pacing on this was a bit fast, right when I saw the scientist grab the jet pack and saw the bomb at the bank I already knew how the rest of this story was going to play out. I can appreciate animation that can tell the whole story without words, but I think this would have been suited with some voice acting. There are no sound effects, which I think there should have been, plus the music although good, didn't fit with the animation. I still liked it though, the story was really sold me on it, even though the pacing wasn't done well.

|| Cheers ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Animation
*Okay Music
*Superb Story

|| Jeers ||
*No Sound


urbfilms responds:

Thank you for the honest review. I was aware of the pacing, but didn't know how to make it better. And yeah, I just liked the song, but I can see how it doesn't fit. Also for the backgrounds, I don't have photoshop, so I had to draw it with flash, which was terrible. Thanks for the review!