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This is just a something I made to go along with some audio I recorded a while ago. Both the voices were done by me.
Not the constructive critisicm comment you've been looking for, But some stars from me too :)
Thank you :)
The title of this submission, compelled me to review this. A decent amount of effort was spared into making this, but it falls slightly flat. It's a good dialog/script, volume's okay, the jokes were cut in at breakneck speeds. In small doses, fast is good.
If the graphics and animation were done up better, it would easily compete with SpeedoSausges work. You did a good read, but the audio quality sounded unrefined, and the differences between the two voices weren't pronounced enough (pretty close though, try recording two voices separately, then cutting them into place).
Your 2 previous animations were more polished, but this one shows more skill in timing and scripting. Either way, you're showing heart in your work, good show!
Thanks for the constructive criticism, just what I was looking for :)
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