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Apr 12, 2013 | 5:43 PM EDT

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It took me almost two years to do this one from start to finish. It's my first and only NG submission. Enjoy



Rated 2 / 5 stars April 13, 2013

that was a baby horse though


Rated 2 / 5 stars April 13, 2013

I'm having a hard time following this, but I can tell you that the whole rabbit from the hat thing is a huge cliche!


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 13, 2013

Wizards don't do things like that. You're thinking of a Magician, someone who does tricks, not magic.

Also, the art/animation here was a bit subpar. I kinda laughed to myself at the "intermission" part of it though. That's just so off-the-wall. 0.5 because I almost laughed.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars April 13, 2013

Sorry, but in the limitless realm of the animation, magic tricks aren't that amusing. Maybe a twist at the end one wouldn't expect for a laugh?


Rated 1 / 5 stars April 12, 2013

I honestly have the slightest idea how on Earth this took you two years to make. I don't want to just say that I don't like it, though, so I'll give you some advice using my guidelines for a flash...

#1 - Don't loop animations. Just, don't...

#2 - Add audio as a filler. No one likes deafening silence.

#3 - Say any and all lines in the flash instead of using text.

#4 - Spend more time on it (or in your case, get a better animation engine) until you know it won't easily get blammed.

I hope that was helpful to you, and I'm sorry for giving it a one. Well, not really...