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It took me almost two years to do this one from start to finish. It's my first and only NG submission. Enjoy
that was a baby horse though
I'm having a hard time following this, but I can tell you that the whole rabbit from the hat thing is a huge cliche!
Wizards don't do things like that. You're thinking of a Magician, someone who does tricks, not magic.
Also, the art/animation here was a bit subpar. I kinda laughed to myself at the "intermission" part of it though. That's just so off-the-wall. 0.5 because I almost laughed.
Sorry, but in the limitless realm of the animation, magic tricks aren't that amusing. Maybe a twist at the end one wouldn't expect for a laugh?
I honestly have the slightest idea how on Earth this took you two years to make. I don't want to just say that I don't like it, though, so I'll give you some advice using my guidelines for a flash...
#1 - Don't loop animations. Just, don't...
#2 - Add audio as a filler. No one likes deafening silence.
#3 - Say any and all lines in the flash instead of using text.
#4 - Spend more time on it (or in your case, get a better animation engine) until you know it won't easily get blammed.
I hope that was helpful to you, and I'm sorry for giving it a one. Well, not really...
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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