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Apr 10, 2013 | 12:45 PM EDT

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I created this with the idea in mind to experiment with longer cartoons and story concepts than my previous works. (Which I will let you find on your own.) The idea is that a young Mermaid Pony Named Senseibelle is Captured by a Fisher Pony Named Derpy I. Arrr. With a curiosity for shiny objects, the mermare finds herself as Derpy's catch of the day~ This may be only part one for now, but time will tell. Let's see how you react, first.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

this one is a lot better


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Kinda clumsy. I looked further down at earlier reviews, and noticed that this was you first attempt at this. Creds for actually making and submitting SOMETHING! The vid was slow as others mentioned, and somewhat hard to follow due to no narration or vocals. You could have tried subtitles, though - that would have worked well with the whole 'silent movie' vibe.
Furbies ... well, I just don't get it....


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Really...awkward.....0.5 for boobies.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

awkward but not bad. the whole silent film thing makes it a bit better

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CleverDerpy responds:

You can blame that on the fact that I had no ready voice actors. May i ask why it's awkward, or perhaps ask what may make it more appealing to you and the surrounding audience. My bet's on the cooky ending music, which may be adjusted if it's getting under people's skin.

Thank you for your input, I'll see to fixing any awkwardness in the film.