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Apr 9, 2013 | 6:53 PM EDT

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I venture to upload this cartoon here.
The cartoon was made in March at the workshop of David Buob.
My goal was to make a short movie in 48 hours, the length of a minute.
Music, voice, animation, graphic design was made by me.
I hope you enjoy!
Reviews are welcome :P

Reviews


SohutohSohutoh

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I like the idea behind this nimation, sad but real.


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ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you!
I think I could done it better...
At the moment i have poor skills on graphic/animation (Sad, but true...)
But I really love doing cartoons. I'm trying do better animation now.
See my next cartoons if you like it :))


KillingyoutwiceKillingyoutwice

Rated 2 / 5 stars

After viewing the flash, I thought something along the lines of, that's it? I admit there's nothing wrong with being short and succinct, in fact I rather prefer a short and succinct piece than a long and overbearing one. The problem I find with this is that not enough is done with it. With many shorts, because of the time constraints, the people pack as much as they can into however long they have. With this short, it almost seems like the exact opposite.

Don't get me wrong, I like the individual aspects of the flash. The animation is very crude in a cute way and the music is very fitting. My problem is that these aspects aren't showcased to their full potential. One point in particular is where the heart is soaring up into the sky only to freeze up and come crashing down. You could have had a split screen showing the couple as the heart is going through it's transformation. Show them falling in love, fighting, and right before they walk away, the heart comes down and collapses the split screen.

Overall, the aspects are good, I just need to see more done with it.

2/5

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ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you! I see.