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Apr 8, 2013 | 2:50 AM EDT

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PRESS SPACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Unedited
Here is the remake of SMZX Ep1
Much better animation, current versions of my sprites, added scenes, rewrote scenes and much longer than the original version
Original version will be Deleted
Also...
There might be FEW typing/grammar errors!
Gredit to xxKaijuKing91xx for text boxes and SMZX logo

Reviews


Dazz316Dazz316

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 8, 2013

Right this seemed like it wasn't an "Ep1" It clearly has backstory.. Change the title as it's pretty misleading. You should find someone who can properly translate it into english for you as while the spelling was fine your grammar was not great.
You should keep out the voices as it seems a bit stupid to just randomly pop up. Either voice the whole thing or none at all.
Tfpivman i assumed was just your username tfp 4 man or whatever but it was also the name of your character, unless this was a small cameo for yourself it seems silly to have someone with a name that an't be pronounced properly.
The story seemed interesting somewhat but you rush from scene to scene. Take more time and write a bit more dialoge. Especially for an "ep1" you need more introduction to things.



famous-monkeyfamous-monkey

Rated 1 / 5 stars April 8, 2013

I had to keep right clicking and checkmarking "play" to get it to run. Clicking on the text boxes doesn't work :( Looks like it had potential though, might wanna reupload it.


tfpivman responds:

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MrRexTV1MrRexTV1

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 8, 2013

Not bad but it has many spelling mistakes!



Pkmn2Pkmn2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 8, 2013

I haven't seen the original version, but I can see, that you've worked hard on it.
The sprites look well-made, but the animation seems floaty. The way they move are similar to a person on the moon. You should increase the aerial movement a bit.
Music and SFXs are used well.

It was interesting in all and there's room for improvement. You should get someone, who proof-reads your subtitles.


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